Revision Journal #46

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How to direct musicians, by MBulteau

Long time no post, but that doesn’t mean there hasn’t been stuff going on.

The revision of Act I is nearing its completion.

Act II, meanwhile, is incurring an unexpected but very welcome change, wherein one superfluous section related to Anju is being replaced by another (also related to Anju), for the benefit of the story and pacing in general.

The second part of Act II has always been complicated to get right, so I’m glad every time it gets a nudge in the right direction.

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